من سمعتك تنشديني وأنا المقهور
فقداني لك يهون ولا انك تفقديني
يوم استاحش عليك البيت وظنيتيه مهجور
أشتري الموت لأجل أطمن قلبك وتشوفيني
عيني تجري الدمعات وقلبي أنا المكسور
لا لا.. ما يفيد مراعاة وانك تطمنيني

سمع وطاعة وعلى كلمتك أنا مجبور
دين علّي أردلك من ما عطيتيني
مناي أملي قلبك أفراح وسرور
أوّفي لحظة من سنين قضيتيها تربيني
ولا دارت الأيام والناس معاها تدور
واقف جنبك ذخر وسند بتلاقيني
يكسرني اني افرض عليك صبر أيام و شهور
يا يما والا تعذريني والا تذبحيني


  • Temmy im crying zain chithy!

    Ya 7beebti ya yuma. I'm going to kiss and hug my mom now. O ma boga shay u will be in your own mother's arms soon :)

    You reminded me of a song by 3abdullah Rowaishid. But you don't listen to music so forget it.

    By Blogger Delicately Realistic, at 8.12.05  

  • Very sad Temi. Did your mother hear it? I hope she did.

    DR if you want to read another real tear jerker read this:
    This is one of my favorite poems and in it a man speaks to his father in the night of his execution.

    By Blogger ZinZinQ8, at 8.12.05  

  • Beuatifull...:) really nice one ... thanks for sharing it ...

    By Blogger Sowhat, at 9.12.05  

  • dc, this isnt going to sound nice but im really glad that u say it moved u/made u cry..
    allah ykhaleelich elwaalda

    zinzin, nop she didnt.. not sure that id want her to either.. again, this isnt going to sound like it does in my head but "im happy" u say its sad

    sowhat hala walla, teslam ma3alaik zod.. i should thank u for reading :)

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 9.12.05  

  • Love it..Nice words temi
    w bel 3arabi (9a7 lesanak)

    By Blogger Rimyoleta, at 9.12.05  

  • tem-tem are u sad?? :(

    Cheer up bro, I don't like the idea of your lonely self being sad over there all alone :(

    zinzin: thanx, I will check it.

    By Blogger Delicately Realistic, at 9.12.05  

  • rima sa7 bdenich

    dc, no im not sad, i just thought of the words lena ma athker mara radait 6alab 7ag omi.. idea being its not abt being away or anything, its abt being unable to do what a mother wishes for

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 9.12.05  

  • teslam wallah
    5oosh poem :)

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9.12.05  

  • Wauw, Sa7 lsanik ya Temetwir!

    Few poems can really move my feelings or touch my sentiments. And this one truly did. I think you're very gifted.

    By Blogger BitterSweet, at 9.12.05  

  • laialy allah yesalmech.. o tara thak elyom estaw3abt ena u have ur mom comment on ur blog.. thab6eeena heh

    mr bittersweet, sa7 bdenek 7abeebi..
    teslamly wet3eesh kelek netharr

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 9.12.05  

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    By Blogger BitterSweet, at 9.12.05  

  • O laish inshAllah rad 6alab 7ag omik?

    By Blogger Delicately Realistic, at 9.12.05  

  • 3ashoooon 3ayal
    7arakaat 9a3baaa

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 9.12.05  

  • dc, doing my best to finish my assignments for this semester way before deadlines.. looks like i can do it, da3waatich

    laialy, allah yekhaleeha lech inshala

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 9.12.05  

  • sa7 elsanek..

    By Blogger MSB, at 10.12.05  

  • il masha3ir wil a7aseees tbayyin min bidayat il abyaat inha mohdaat 7ag il walda il 3azeeza ;') allah ykhalleeha lik wikhallee kil ommahatna lina wikhalleelik hal talent il mazajy hehehe (;

    By Blogger I-1-2-C-U, at 10.12.05  

  • msb sa7 bdenech

    i12cu elaahy ameen.. a7sant mawlaana

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 10.12.05  

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    By Blogger Temetwir, at 10.12.05  

  • :'( Bachaytny . . .I remebered my grandad alla yer7oma :( PHD ramblings post ade me cry now u :(

    MAshaaaaaaaala is that urs ?
    3asa alla iwafgik keep us posted :P sawly bayt 3al maaashy :"> my name is Dalal :P

    9a7 ilsanik :">

    By Blogger PINKJAWBREAKER, at 11.12.05  

  • ade = made * = typo SORRY

    By Blogger PINKJAWBREAKER, at 11.12.05  

  • dalalism allah yer7oma

    o sa7 ilsaanech :)

    - what ru asking abt "is that urs"?
    - which PHD ramblings post ?

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 11.12.05  

  • youre a poet too..mashala..kamil min megamee3oh:-)

    By Blogger A3sab, at 11.12.05  

  • a3sab tislemeen, walaw eni ma fahamt bas a7es rad-ha "el kaamel allah" :)

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 11.12.05  

  • loved the poem...mashallah 3alaik...9a7 elsanak...6ab3ab enta ma lak shugel bel abraj...bass konak pisces...(burj el 7oot) means you're a great poet..and you just proved it!

    we al7een ben 3arf...hatha 6ala3 ye3arfek wila daga....kilish gemt a7ateek..goolee ana shako...a7'af et9eerlee wana madree!!

    By Blogger MissCosmoKuwait, at 11.12.05  

  • misscosmo HERE U GO AGAIN
    sa7 bdenich .. o madre 3ana wala lel7een

    By Blogger Temetwir, at 11.12.05  

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